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jatzemis wrote a new post, Reflection on Class, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
This class was very informative, and we learned many things that will help us in our careers, but most of all we learned how to historically think. It was hard to train my brain to stop thinking about history […]
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jatzemis wrote a new post, The Great Depression and the end of Prohibition, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
My third story is about how prohibition ended. In the early 1920′s Cleveland was a booming city and was becoming one of the largest industrial cities in the nation. Life was good for many, especially for women […] -
jatzemis wrote a new post, Eliot Ness, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
My first story is about Eliot Ness. Ness was known throughout the U.S. for his work in Chicago. He was born and raised in Chicago, and eventually became Chicago’s safety director. He decided to joined […] -
jatzemis wrote a new post, Speakeasies and raids during prohibition, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
My second story is about the raids that went on during prohibition in Cleveland. In 1919, prohibition was enforced in Ohio, which prohibited the manufacturing, transporting, and sale of alcoholic beverages. This […] -
jatzemis commented on the post, Air Show Plaza, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
This is a very strong story. I really have nothing to add.
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jatzemis commented on the post, Crawford Auto Aviation Museum, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Good job Frank, again I think you have done some of the best work in the class. You seem to really understand what clevelandhistorical is looking for.
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jatzemis commented on the post, National Air Races, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Good job Frank, I have no suggestions for you (mostly because you have pulled your stories off much better than I have been able to), but I am sure Professor Tebeau has great insight for you.
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jatzemis commented on the post, St. Wenceslas, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I agree with the others here, this was very interesting, but needs to be more “humanized.”
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jatzemis commented on the post, 1937: A Year of Labor’s Image and Action, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Good job Brian, I love your writing style, but I think that they are looking for an even richer narrative, so build on what you already have.
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jatzemis commented on the post, Bohemian National Hall, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I love your photos in this story, they are very clear and interesting. Of course check your citations, but they were really great photos.
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jatzemis commented on the post, The Greatest Generation of Women: Labor’s Women through The Depression, World War II, and Vietnam, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Awesome images Brian! I love how the images make the story come alive. I think that they are looking for a local touch though through a certain place in Cleveland. Like Frank I am no expert (I am having a lot of […]
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jatzemis commented on the post, Cleveland Labor Continues to “Occupy” Tradition, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I love this story, but I think that you need more text to really make the story come alive, because your pictures are pretty good.
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jatzemis commented on the post, Czech Bakeries, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I am no expert on this app, but some suggestions are the ones already given. Make sure that you cite your pictures, and get a few more pictures to help tell your story. I love how this story is personal for you.
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jatzemis commented on the post, Acme-Cleveland Corp., on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I had a hard time following the story as well. I am not sure how you could make it easier to follow, but having bigger and clearer pictures with better captions might be something that would help you tell your story better.
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jatzemis commented on the post, Public Auditorium, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
This was interesting, but your photos need to be cited a little better because we need to know where they came from.
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jatzemis commented on the post, War Memorial Fountain – Fountain of Eternal Life, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I like the story, but it needs to be more personal and focused I think.
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jatzemis commented on the post, 1936 Republican National Convention, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
This is definately your best one!
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jatzemis commented on the post, Marcus Hanna and the Election of 1896, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I like this story a lot, but I think there needs to be more photos to tell the story. Also, I agree with Daniel that the focus should be on Hanna.
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jatzemis commented on the post, Tom L. Johnson and the Big Tent Meetings, on the site Teaching & Learning History 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I really like how you can use this story to add to the one that already exists. I also have a problem with a story that already exists, so I will have to take that advice. All in all this was an interesting story, […]
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jatzemis wrote a new post, Monument wars, on the site Teaching & Learning History 11 months, 1 week ago
I really enjoyed reading Kirk Savage’s Monument Wars. It was my favorite book of the class by far. The author does a great job telling a story through the art of the memorials on the Washington Mall. I have been […] - Load More
